A Beginner Looking for Any and All feedback!

[charred onyx]

This is my first project I've ever started with a end goal in mind. I would definitely still consider myself a beginner.

This scene is going to be short video sequence when it's finished.
I'm looking for any feedback I can get, please critique my work!

A Beginner Looking for Any and All feedback!

[burnt harness]

It does look pretty nice, but it's if its your first project i think you might be aiming a bit too high. But idk im kinda in the same boat.

Also perhaps don't hyperfocus on making a single scene or part of the project perfect