@hard basin i tried dressing it the best i could :/ but it still doesnt look nice
#how can i improve it?
hard basin
First thought is it's overexposed
Too bright
Although in terms of set dressing it looks damn good, depending on what you're going for. So I can give some better advice, what are you going for with this scene?
Is it a recently abandoned orc settlement? One that's currently lived in where you have to fight orcs? One that's long abandoned?
@tacit gazelle
agile topaz
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It's really bright. Which is distracting in all the wrong ways.
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More information as to what "feeling's" you are trying to invoke would help.
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Personally, for an Ork Outpost/Settlement, it doesn't seem rustic enough.
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Everything seems to clean.. the ladders, poles, tent roofs.. maybe try making it all seem more rough!?
tacit gazelle
Although in terms of set dressing it looks damn good, depending on what you're g...
Not abandoned, orcs are still living there, i just haven't been able to find suitable models to put in there yet, Ill lower the exposure
tacit gazelle
1) It's really bright. Which is distracting in all the wrong ways.
2) More inf...
2)- it's like an orc base, you go there, you fight them and you gain xp kinda thing, a low level base at that
3/4) - could you please recommend some imperfections? As in what could i add to make it seem less perfect and more messy
Thanks!
agile topaz
3/4) - could you please recommend some imperfections? As in what could i add to ...
Tattered cloth(tent roofs), misshapen boards, fence posts, gnarled looking wood.
Maybe some skulls, broken weapons/armor laying around.
Add some more color too.
Basically make it look like feral idiots put it all together.
tacit gazelle
Tattered cloth(tent roofs), misshapen boards, fence posts, gnarled looking wood....
where do you think the weapons should be at?
agile topaz
Personally, weapons they could use.. stacked against the tents. Possibly piled somewhere. Broken weapons.. like former enemies weapons.. scattered outside the camp.. along with bones.
tacit gazelle
Personally, weapons they could use.. stacked against the tents. Possibly piled s...
that is what i thought as well but isnt this portion a bit empty?
what so i add here?
i could go with bones and a few weapons/shields lying there but what else otthher than that?
could go with cloth as well
agile topaz
Other than making all the wood look less, clean cut. More gnarled.. I think it looks fine.
I think with the changes I suggested, an enough scattered bones, weapons, etcetera.. it will all look nicer.
Just don't overdue it. A few things here an there. Could try googling Warhammer Fantasy Orks for some reference.
hard basin
Not abandoned, orcs are still living there, i just haven't been able to find sui...
Defo needs a bit more brutality then. Maybe some bones scattered around, a spit with a human on it or whayever
tacit gazelle
Other than making all the wood look less, clean cut. More gnarled.. I think it l...
Alright
tacit gazelle
Defo needs a bit more brutality then. Maybe some bones scattered around, a spit ...
Mhm
Okay
Thanks!
hard basin
No probs!
tacit gazelle
I'll send the improved version in a few hours
tacit gazelle
I accidentally slept on my chair like 6 hours ago 😭, till when are you awake cuppatea?
crude idol
The reduced exposure helps a lot.