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#Platinum 1 Kiriko [0NZJRP]
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I'm in Vod channel or do u prefer me to tell u in text
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alright I gotcha
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I’ll type it out today for u I am just doing something right now
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Forgive me
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what I can say is when I did watch the game play, there is sometimes were you didn't have to tp to your teammates in the beginning for example when the an sleep the dva u did not need to tp there I would say this too as I was watching I didn't see a lot of mistake that you did, sometimes I would be careful with your tp's too
forgive me that it took like two days to text u my bad
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Generally was quite good in this game.
A couple times on defense, moreso on first point, I thought you floated main at times where you could have instead have been moving to a better position.
Aiming seems quite good so wouldn't really consider it a problem. There were times, as said by Metro, that you tped in where it was dangerous/not advantageous to do so. Using tp to go IN is more often worse than using it to get out after you've got to a position (not that you cant, its situational).
While you're ON your good position/angle in this match, there were times where you ONLY focused on damage where having weaved between damage and healing when your teammates were in sight would have been good, notably on your jq when you guys were attacking. Same thing sometimes happened when you played main where you would ONLY heal when there were opportunities to weave a single shot in at least (I assume you're aware of the shoot shoot heal etc).
Suzu usage seemed fine, couple times held it where needed to use it, couple times used it where didn't need to, but nothing egregious/standing out on that point to me. Same goes for your ult generally.
Kinda got a bit unlucky on the offense, along with bad staggering so you guys really had only like 2/3 "teamfights"