#Nowhere : Part 1 - A Post Apocalyptic Adventure

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brittle magnet
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The logline needs reworked and shortened quite a bit, try answering the questions below to get a bit more of an idea on what could be included and we'll go from there

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!logline

velvet crescentBOT
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How to Write a Logline

​Answer the following questions to help others workshop your logline:

  1. What is the title and genre of your screenplay?
  2. What is your current logline? Is it for tv, feature film, or short?
  3. Describe your protagonist(s) in 1-2 sentences.
  4. What is your protagonist's main goal?
  5. What obstacles will they encounter in Act 2 (internal and external)?
  6. What is at stake for your characters or their world?
  7. Is there a twist or secret you haven’t told us yet? Your logline may be too generic or vague, so spill the beans!
  8. Still having trouble? Feel free to share a synopsis of your story!
old jacinth
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the thing is i will be able to do it when i will me sure of the complete story of the 8 episodes T_T

orchid seal
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This is good. I don’t know why we’re not allowed to read the actual script but if we could chat privately I’d love to read your script and give you suggestions

old jacinth
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the script ins't ready yet. I'm working on the whole universe of the show, there is a lot of lore and i want to be sure the actual story isn't full of plot holes (there is a bunch of ideas i scrapped because OD MY HELLA GODNESS it was so stupid). But thanks for your return and yeah, if the server authorize it i would love to give you more infos about Heather travel in the Nowhere Universe ! ✨

orchid seal
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You can just dm me you know