Longline: Sanchez Boxing | Script Hive | Page 1

fair idol Apr 12, 2025, 4:32 AM

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Title: Sanchez Boxing(Working Title)
Format: Feature
Genre: Black Comedy
Logline: After killing the golden boy, an washed up boxer uses it in a attempt to regain his former fame

low estuary Apr 12, 2025, 4:52 AM

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I'm confused what "the golden boy" means in this context

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How does he kill this guy? How does he actually "use it in an attempt to regain his former fame"?

fair idol Apr 12, 2025, 4:57 AM

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golden boy would mean like 'peak of the peak'. younger, more successful. like an A-List Star. As for the death, It's an death in the ring. I was thinking of something like a punch to the gut. Like how Houdini died. For the 'attempt to regain his former fame'. It's like playing to the media.
Did I explain it too vaguely?

low estuary Apr 12, 2025, 5:04 AM

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Yeah, I don't really get the concept. So he kills this guy. Attention is already on him. His name will be in headlines. What is he then doing for 90 minutes? If his goal is fame, he's already received it from killing this dude

fair idol Apr 12, 2025, 5:06 AM

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So the goal is not compatible with an long term runtime. I see. Thanks for the feedback.

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I'll workshop an version with an better Goal

#Longline: Sanchez Boxing