#Coffeetown

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somber quest
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Title:Coffeetown, Format:Television, Genre:Comedy Drama, Logline: The fun filled adventures of an everyday Coffee Establishment and the truth of the nature of Coffee on the lighter side of life. Pages: 32, Notes: Looking for feedback for meeting requirements to place on television, with producers and execs, honest but constructive criticism always appreciated. Would like to have feedback which allows the series to be actionable. Have an 8 episode story arc ready to go.

last burrow
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Ok almost got it! But it's missing the PDF file for your script. You added too many tags (it's not also a pitch deck, i assume)

And you'll want to add some line breaks in your poast so it's easier to read.

somber quest
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Kk ty I’ll try again harp