Trash Castle

[gleaming shard]

What religion does she turn to?

[earnest vapor]

is this logline for the pilot or for the series?

[earnest vapor]

for a series logline this reads more like set-up than story. what's the series engine? what's the dramatic seed that's going to keep generating stories? so she started a nature-centric religion - where's the conflict/objectives/obstacles?

[earnest vapor]

that's still not telling me what I'll be seeing on a weekly basis. I'd suggest answering the following questions, in full, without worrying how they'll fit into the final logline. this help make clear what your show is about

!logline