You are missing a decent amount of damage from being geared towards Prot rather than Fury which would make a noticable difference.
- 2x 710 weapons, no crafted 2h
- Only a single embellished item (Bracers)
- Crit/Haste secondaries on belt aren't great for Fury.
Secondary stat wise you are likely too high on Crit and a too low on Mastery than what sims would suggest.
Enrage uptime is fine on Plexus & Loomithar (you can greed here more by leaping out very late and charging back in as soon as possible), on Naazhindri you are only at ~89% which can be much higher.
You seem to be casting Thunderous Roar as a priority at times in ST where it is basically dead last for us and should only be used when there is no other option.
There are times in ST where you are casting Rampage a little early (less than 115 rage) which can cause periods of not many buttons to press if you have bad RNG, generally you are doing fine for the most part here.
I only checked a few of them but at times you tend to Rampage a few globals before Bladestorming which would put you at risk of dropping Enrage during or soon after, after every BS we want to spam RBs even if overcapping rage until you are either out of charges OR enrage is about to drop to take advantage of the Slaughtering Strikes talent and Brutal Finish.