gusty prawn
As the title suggests, I would like to have some insight on what i am doing wrong. Looking ingame during the fights, i am on average in the top 5 dps, but looking at my parses, they are still relatively low. Is it my talents? Is it my priority list? I’m unsure lol
https://www.warcraftlogs.com/character/us/moon-guard/stiõrra
silver lily
hi onyx i am lex and i went over your log, specifically fractilus bc i think that boss provides the most inside on how you play your rotation :)
Opener
Your opener is wrong / scuffed here is how you do a proper opener;
DpsPot(<1sec before pull) -> Reck -> Avatar -> Charge (this will provide you with enough rage to cast rampage and be insta enraged) -> Rampae -> BS (Bladestrom) -> spamming RB (raging blow) until one of the 3 following conditions is ture; run out of RB stacks, LOST enrage OR got 5 stacks of SS (Slaughtering strikes) (i will explain why we do this after BS in the next point!) -> Rampage -> Normal oration
Stacking BF + SS dmg amp
Now, remember the thing we did with RB after BS? We enter this "Phase" after each BS reason is that we use the 2 dmg amps from BF (Brutal finish, a hero tree note that makes it so that after a BS your next Rampage oes 50% inc dmg) AND the dmg amp provided by SS (gained via RB)
After a BS we spam RB until one of the following conditions is ture;
The only 2 reasons why we would rampage before getting to that point are;
-random BTs
you sometimes seam to have random BT (Bloodthirst) casts in your timeline just for comparison you have 17 CPM of BT while I have 10.
We rly only want to cast BT if we literally cant press anything else BUT WW thats how shit BT is.
ideally the only BT casts on a kill are those cast by BS, but that always depends on proc RNG.
-not respecting SD Conditions
We want to press Execute / use a SD proc very frequently but only under certain conditions which are the following;
above 20% target hp
I will provide a link at the end of the review for you to get a WA that will do the thinking for you and make a sound + light up when one of these conditions is true, and if you alrdy have the WA you need to respect it more, these procs are of upmost importance!
Alright final words
This was oly a quick overlook since it was 2 am when i started looking into it and its 3:38 now (had some dog issues in-between to be fair) So maybe i did overlook sth but i think i got most of it , also i only went over fracti if you want me to look at a specific boss let me know and i will gladly do it :)
I hope i oculd at least help you a little bit and if you have any more questions just @me or dm me wherever you feel comfortable!
--i will be going to bed though after posting this so might take a few hours for me to reply hehe--
SD WA: https://wago.io/r8u4tHLRQ
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gusty prawn
hi onyx i am lex and i went over your log, specifically fractilus bc i think tha...
hi there! it's been a month, i think i have improved but i still feel like i am not doing the damage i should be doing. we have killed mythic loom but that pull was bad ( i know lol ) so i will link below the "private" logs of our current wipes, just to see what i am doing wrong. i'd appreciate if you could perhaps look over it, despite you already doing so previously :3
silver lily
hi there! it's been a month, i think i have improved but i still feel like i am ...
Sure absolutely no problem is it ok if I do it later down the line today? Or do you need it ASAP? - happy to help!
gusty prawn
Sure absolutely no problem is it ok if I do it later down the line today? Or do ...
oh absolutely no worries, take your time!!
silver lily
Aight perfect!
silver lily
alright so i went over your log again specifically over your guys best pull (pull 3) now a few key points i pointed out last time are still present and need fixing. also grats on the kill on Loom!
opener
so I am not fully 100% sure on why the fuck this is happening or what is happening, in your replay it shows that you have reck and avatar and pot active the moment you pull but also cast charge in almost melee range? but when i look in your buff uptime and go to event view it doesnt show you had these buffs active the moment you started pulling? yet both buffs get removed at 23 and 27 sec into the fight so i am assuming you press them pre pull which is suboptimal. try to press your pot at >1 sec pull timer and reck avatar as the pull timer hits 0 you dont want to be late with opening but also using these CDs early reduces the amount of casts you will be able to get off while they take effect.
I will again reiterate on how the proper opener needs to be done because its still not perfect yet.
NOW i did provide a screenshot of how your opener looks VS how mine looks so you can see how it should look this sometimes is more helpful than text lol. also idk why but its not showing my pot either i forgot or it just doesnt show it lol but pot should be before reck (also the reason on why i cast charge before avatar isnt rly a big thing i just like it that way but it has 0 impact on your dmg i just pref doing it this way)
Not making use of BF + SS stacking
now what the fuck does that mean you might ask yourself?
after BS we get a buff that is called BF (Brutal finish) this makes it so that the Rampage after BS does 50% inc dmg. we stack this with the rampage dmg mod of SS. SS is a buff that is applied after pressing RB and makes it so that the next Rampage does 20% inc dmg this caps at 5 stacks (100%)
Now a key note on this is that we only spam RB until one of the following conditions is true;
during this "phase" we IGNORE Rage cap just spam as many RBs after BS as you can until one of these 3 conditions is met, I might also add that during these Phase, if your execute WA yells at you to Execute, using execute / SD has prio! after using that pro you can continue slamming RB!
i will ones again attach a screenshot of how this looks in practice. (its one screenshot showing 3 different scenarios in the same fight, on the first one i got rly lucky and got up to 4 stacks of SS, on the second one i had a SD condition interrupt my RB spam and on the third one i got 3 RBs in before needing to rampage)
Casting Rampage too often/ early
To your defence, this has gotten better compared to last review.
Rly try to min max those GCDs between needing to rampage, think about it every time you could squeeze out another RB before hitting +115 rage your rampage after this will do an additional 20% inc dmg, if you do this 5x in a fight you would get a bonus Rampage dmg wise without even needing to cast it so rly try to use rampage at +115 rage not below it. Only cast it below this threshold you cast it when you dont have RB charges or execute / SD procs.
Not respecting SD/ Execute conditions
These are a big one you need to respect those! we want to use a SD proc / execute if one of the following conditions are true;
above 20% target hp
I linked a WA last time make use of it it takes your brain fully of these conditions just use it when the WA tells you to use it. also, if the WA tells you to use it than its of upmost importance to use it! the only thing that has higher prio is being enraged and using your CDs.
You still have some random BT casts
BT has 0 value it provides no buffs does poor dmg and generates low rage, RB is a better button in every single way, does more dmg, provides more rage, buffs Rampage 
I attached a screenshot of the APL that shows you just how unimportant this button is
**alright final verdict 
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A few key points are still excising that need fixing, this time i tried to help out with screenshots to point out how it should look and hope it helps, now i do not want to discourage you almost every single review i do has these issues so you are not alone and i helped plenty other ppl before to improve so i can help you as well. also a big part of "bad" logging is not only your dps, if the overall grp dps is bad this will lead to longer kill times and in most cases especially ST the longer the kill times the worse the log will be! I hope i could help you a bit and if you have any more questions you can always @me or shoot me a dm always happy to help someone seeking to improve!
@gusty prawn formating is a bit scuffed bc it went over the char limit 
hope its still readable on second thought i could have send the screenshots at the end
edit
*Fixed the fucking formatting, couldn't look at this lol *
gusty prawn
thank you so much!!
so for the rampage, essentially i just want to press it to keep enrage up? is what im understanding?
i don’t press it even if it is shiny but still have enrage?
last night i reviewed the old review u made for me, and saw i went from 4.4M to 5M, so i did improve a little on that. i thought i had the right WA, but i had one that was outdated so it wasn’t following the “conditions” correctly for execute
i have a macro that pops reck, avatar, and then tempered at same time, should i change that?
silver lily
sry just came back from the gym
yes we kinda use rampage as a sort of enrage maintainer we want to get as many GCDs into our enrage before we need to reRampage again i did the math on why this matters in another review and i can pull it up its rly simple! and yes/no we mostly want to press rampage at +115 rage the only two reasons to press it the moment "its shiny" is either we ran out of enrage (keeping enrage up is the Highest prio OR we ran out of RB charges (Bc rampage does have a chance to refill 1 charge of RB therefore restarting the RB loop again) so there are 2 conditions on why you would press it below +115 rage :)
uuuhm from what i know its not that big of an issue having it macroed together i do not like it for example i like to be in control of when i use my burst so i would advice against it also having it macroed together might make you hold CDs for them to overlap which we dont rly do we want to use CDs as quickly as possible (this is for killing a boss if you want to pars we want to use them at the right moments lol and this sometimes means holding)
gusty prawn
sry just came back from the gym
1. yes we kinda use rampage as a sort of enrage...
i have it macroed but i also have it so that i can use them individually if needed! sorry should’ve specified lol. it’s mostly just for opener as i do click some of my skills, and felt like clicking all 3+ charge in the beginning was not efficient
silver lily
i have it macroed but i also have it so that i can use them individually if need...
Oh yea than that's fine if you have it like that only for the opener it's all good! 
gusty prawn
and whos is this
silver lily
It's mine 😅
silver lily
Well fury is fury this spec rly doesn't have a lot going on it's a very simple spec all the issues I pointed out? 99% of all my reviews have the same issues, also all of them aren't that big in the smal picture, fury has like 3 rotational buttons without burst but making these smal errors over and over and over again, again bc fury has a very short loop just adds up, so it might seam like a lot but it rely isn't. One thing you are doing right for example is you prioritize RB over BT that's alrdy like 60% of your dmg right there
There is a rule for fury which states ABC - Always Be Casting
As long as this rule is followed
You are 90% done lol