#Fleetwood Mac - Silver Springs (Live - The Dance, Burbank CA 1997)

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faint notch
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Hi everyone, my first CDLC with some upgrades from the first version.
Please let me know if it needs some polishing.
Some bass notes are done by ear but trying to get closer to the Live version since online tabs are mixed or miss something.

Hope you enjoy this and I appreciate any feedback πŸ™‚

https://ignition4.customsforge.com/cdlc/99312

faint notch
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tbh I need to work on the guitar. I want to add chords name (do you usually add arpegios?), some missing vibratos and the solo part.
Should I separate always the notes, except for ho, po, etc..) ? for example de scheenshot

west remnant
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I tried your updated version (1.1) for bass and i'm happy you updated it with some of the suggestions I mentioned, especially 10 second leading silence and the notes not touching etc. I did notice a few things for the bass path for 1.1 so I'll upload some screenshots so you roughly know where and what I'm talking about πŸ˜…

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Here in the intro it looks like you added a new section with a different FHP, so I would suggest keep the FHP (fret hand position) on the third fret and have the verse section start either on the open note previous or on the open note after this one. It doesn't have to start right when Stevie Nicks starts to sing. You probably have to set the section with a moveR1, sorta like this:

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on this part those 3 F's should just be a standard C note on the A string. I would probably also update the FHP to 3 on the G note before

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missing a hammer on here

faint notch
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I just realized you created the studio version. You must know this better hehe

west remnant
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here the fill should be something like this

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that fill also repeats here

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this is more simple, I think he just plays 3-3-2 here, on the A string

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that A note should probably be a hammer on, should also update the FHP to 3 to match it. The notes after should be something like this: 5A. 3E then 3A, before you go to the C again

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here it looks like you added a tiny section before the END phrase, just put the END right after the last note, dont need a no-guitar section there

faint notch
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you practically nailed it

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ty very much

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EOF it's killing me but I have to make it somehow

west remnant
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For the chorus there is a bit more going on. He often walk ups rather than down after the first G on the chorus. The later chorus parts in the song were more correct to that regard. I would take a look at them sometime in the future. Also you start the triplets a bar or two early, if you just move them later, they sound more correct.

west remnant
faint notch
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he does some octaves at the end maybe?

west remnant
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I didnt catch any octaves as far as I could hear

faint notch
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allright

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ty very much

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I shouldnt update too much the CDLC, next version will be in some days probably. Need to get familiar with EOF

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I appreciate taking your time on this

west remnant
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no worries take your time, as you said it takes time to know this program (old as it is). You get the hang of it more when you've made 6-7 different cdlcs, then you can always go and update them at your own pace, as you mentioned πŸ™‚

faint notch
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Didnt expect to create a CDLC in my life at any point. But I wanted to have this song so bad ingame

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But now that I startted, I may do other songs proably

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it's a hard work, people do amazing stuff with it

west remnant
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One thing in regards to lyrics I forgot to mention, (though this isn't THAT important as other stuff as sections and phrases). To get them more in line with ODLC you should split the lines more often and have smaller amount of lyrics displayed on the screen at any given time. For instance that lyric line in brackets should be on its own new line and have no brackets either. Small stuff but worth keeping a tab on.

faint notch
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yes, I have already moved those lines πŸ™‚

west remnant
faint notch
west remnant
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Im sure someone else will pop in soon and check the guitar parts aswell. Guitar is not my strong suit so I try to leave that for others.

faint notch
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I don't play bass so you were really helpful

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for guitar I need to work on the solo for sure, those slides are not good