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frozen abyss Mar 15, 2026, 12:43 AM

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Hi, if anyone has time, I'd want to know if the tones are ok (effect and volume wise, as I strangely enough had trouble with these here) and whether I messed up or overlooked something with the notes, mostly on bass and for the solos on the lead.

Lead plays electric guitar and some of the synth chords, rhythm plays only the guitar, including the one in the background of the solos, and alt rhythm is the same as rhythm but it also includes the synth chords from the lead track.

Thanks in advance for feedback!

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📎 Yuka-Takeuchi_Sabushikuta-Nemurenai_Elevatorisbest_v0_1_p.psarc

dim silo Mar 15, 2026, 2:32 AM

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We recently discussed lending a hand with the feedback, even if it's just to say we think it's okay. In my case, commenting on what I see will also help me learn Prayge

I've tried the lead. I think the tones are fine; perhaps the "Emulated" is more controversial because it's a difficult tone to nail, but you could lower its volume so it blends a bit more with the music—after all, it's not a real guitar.

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I don't think that note on the 20th fret after the bend exists.

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I don't know what the pros will tell you, but I think this FHP in all these muting parts is more about playing almost everything with the index finger than anything else (unless the original artist does it that way).

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I haven't seen anything else after one pass, great job 🫶

frozen abyss Mar 15, 2026, 4:00 AM

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dim silo We recently discussed lending a hand with the feedback, even if it's just to say...

Yea it was hard to get the tone of bright brass synth stabs to have the right dynamic and vibrato, though idk what much I can do with it with what the game offers

frozen abyss Mar 15, 2026, 4:01 AM

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dim silo I don't know what the pros will tell you, but I think this FHP in all these muti...

I personally play such parts only with index finger too but I mentioned on multiple occasions that my fretting hand fingers are horrible at playing guitar and mangle chords and aiming hard so I do FHPs based on what I am used to seeing on quality charts and how a normal player would probably play it, paired with context from the upcoming notes/structure

frozen abyss Mar 15, 2026, 4:04 AM

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dim silo I haven't seen anything else after one pass, great job 🫶

Sweet, and thanks, I'll be sure to look into what you have said tommorow, I'm glad to hear that my work and polishing is giving good results compared to ai slop lmao

frozen abyss Mar 15, 2026, 10:58 PM

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dim silo I don't think that note on the 20th fret after the bend exists.

Alright, got rid of that note, adjusted two others in that solo and lowered the volume of the emulated tone a bit

📎 Yuka-Takeuchi_Sabushikuta-Nemurenai_Elevatorisbest_v0_2_p.psarc

dim silo Mar 16, 2026, 1:56 AM

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I see that everything is fine and sounds good. Now we're in the hands of someone more experienced. I hope I've been of some help.

I also tested the bass and only noticed this sneaky FHP 🧐

frozen abyss Mar 16, 2026, 3:04 AM

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Oops. missed that

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thanks for pointing that out

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