#[RECHART] kz(livetune) - STARTLINER

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fossil wyvern
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this is the third time you've shown STARTLINER to the class, lyra
I made and finished the chart a while ago, but I wasn't happy with it, so I learned how to do stem separation without using online websites (because ethics), got better at hearing basslines, and recharted this song.
I think it's better, but if there's anything that I missed please let me know.
Notably: worried that I used too many short sustains, and some other FHP stuff in the verse and choruses.

warm sedge
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Hell yea ill get to this when I'm home

warm sedge
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That 10 can just have an FHP of 7

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Then 10 here

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Also reminder to not have sustains on notes that are less than a beat long

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I think you're using Charter?

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It's fine to have an FHP width of 4 here

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You should never have anything smaller than 4. Larger is fine for some cases where you stretch or tap

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Switch to FHP 6 on the 6

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Then maybe 8 to 10 here or just stick the 8

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Sticking with the 8 keeps it steady with the notes after the ones on the 10th fret too

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Then back to 6

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Then 5 after those the 6 8

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I know accented could also mean play it louder than regularly but idk about having those here. It sounds the same volume

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This part could stay at 5 and move down when the 4 comes up

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make a new FHP at the 10

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Same thing as the start

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FHP starting at 6

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New FHP for that 12 there

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You get the idea

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Thats about it

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note-wise, i think its ok

fossil wyvern
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also everything that you mentioned has been fixed (as of 2 seconds ago), thanks for the feedback!

warm sedge
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almost there

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when you play octaves, 99% of the time, if not 100%, you have the FHP on the root note

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this one is similar to the intro where you just do a microshift to play that 10 with the pinky

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so a FHP of 7 there

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same with this 12

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the 10 and 8 can be on FHP 8

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thats all

mortal burrow
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without playing it, those phrases look too long to me