#Masayoshi Takanaka - Tears Of The Sun

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carmine slate
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oh man, awesome, I really want to help check this one, hopefully you can wait until tomorrow? I'm not sure I'll be able to get to it tonight but I have an off day tomorrow

silent mauve
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it came together so fast and easily I am paranoid I missed something obvious ๐Ÿ˜ญ First of my new charts to go 100% through Charter instead of EOF

carmine slate
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๐Ÿ˜“ ahh all with charter.. yeah I'll check it out!

silent mauve
carmine slate
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so this FHP shift needs to be removed/ changed because here's the next note played

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that camera shifting was pointless and made me dizzy lol ๐Ÿ˜ต

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19E is a wrong note here, I think it should be 18E

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sensing some more illogical phrase changes here, oh wait maybe they kind of make sense since the riff would overlap the measure changes

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some sort of bend maybe is missing on this last 15E here?

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kinda sounds like a bend here too

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maybe reevaluate that part a bit keeping in mind there's some more bends

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this unpitched slide out kinda looks like it's just 1 fret long, maybe make it at least 1 fret longer

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this last phrase goes into the fade with no notes playing on the path, would be much better to end the phrase and the highlighted highway right after that last note somewhere

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and finally, going back to the beginning, I'm not quite sure about these A string notes, they don't match the recording in sound/ pitch nor do I really hear any hammer on note, kind just sounds like some string muted notes