#Re post of a wip fanfic of Invisigal first days as hero. First 20 pages done (thats why the repost).
slate pulsar
Pages 1-4
Pages 5-8
Pages 9-13
Pages 14-15
pages 16-18:
Pages 19-20
I'll post the story somewhere when i complete page 30, so for now you can see the story here
I'll appreciate any feedback
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subtle sage
grand apex
slate pulsar
Still writing, but i will most likely repost the whole thing when i reach 30 pages
After that, the story will be uploaded to Archives of our own and any updates will go there
fierce spoke
Still writing, but i will most likely repost the whole thing when i reach 30 pag...
Ok, I like the story so far
fleet fable
Honestly it's really good
The only thing, is the slight grammar and punctuation errors but they really dont bother me
My biggest problem is that there isn't more lol
But seriously it is a really good fan fic
inland current
please tell us wen you do 🥺
slate pulsar
The only thing, is the slight grammar and punctuation errors but they really don...
Dude, i was checking what you said, i fucked up with the punctuation lol
slate pulsar
My biggest problem is that there isn't more lol
Just you wait, 12/21/2025
slate pulsar
please tell us wen you do 🥺
I'll re post the 30 pages here and with it i'll leave a link to where i posted the "offical" fic
tired meadow
THAT IS A F@CKIN MASTERPIECE!!! ❤️ 
fleet fable
Just you wait, 12/21/2025
I will mark my calendars
inland current
Just you wait, 12/21/2025
really 🥺
slate pulsar
really 🥺
Yes, on the 21st i should be gettting the invitation to Archives of our own, i'll post the fic there as well as a repost here with the 1st 30 pages (a total of ten chapters)
fleet fable
Nice