What can I do to improve

[grave stump]

Just wondering what I can do here to improve, if there’s any mistakes that I’ve done please let me know https://www.warcraftlogs.com/reports/hfC7RLmkqv6VYrPX?fight=5&type=damage-done&source=79

[raven locust]

Honestly, at least on averzian there's not a lot of mistakes if any, definitely no egregious ones. You overcapped on tip 3 times, swiped once without tip, and your boomsticks missed targets but I think the boomstick misses were because everything was being obliterated and the adds just died by the time your channel finished

You're using twin fangs so the kill command prior to takedown is unnecessary

I'd be mindful of where you play without lethal calibration

Not having two against many is kinda buns on fights with cleave

but other than that, parsing comes down to "How much damage can I gobble up"

and the answer to that in heroic is.. not a lot

this is the 45s add spawn

here's the 2 min

In mythic, the first add spawn coems out around 1 min so you can takedown it, but heroic it's much quicker so we just kinda get hosed

guess you could sit on it for the 45 sec, then use it at 2 min again cause you don't really get a another use after the 2 min