Mechanica WIP:)

[warped pewter]

I have not seen enough of this adorable characters so I’ll take it into my own hands lol, also I’m experimenting with perspective!
I’m gonna fix the face bc it looks lowkey horrible but yeah

Also the hand looks really weird, so feel free to critique!

[vernal wren]

Well after I'm done with my drawing she's probably next on my list nice wip btw

[warped pewter]

Thank you!

[steady wolf]

Ohoho an artist open for critiquing ok then here I go

-Her whole body proportion looks masculine, thin up the chin, make the neck smaller, and make the shoulders less broad

• the left shoulder and armpit is out of position, if ur trying a pose with the body on a 45 degree angle, I recommend to lessen the mass on the opposite side of the arm where she's pointing

[warped pewter]

Thank you so much!! I was wondering why she looked so old/masculine, that helps a lot:)

[warped pewter]

Update:)

[warped pewter]

Thank you sm!🫶🫶

[warped pewter]

Flat colors done(dw I haven’t done any rendering yet, but I thought I’d post it here before j do.) Again, open to criticisms<3

[desert sand]

my critique would be about the nose. animie-like characters usually have smaller noses

[gentle coral]

Ur missing some details with the palm of the hand

just add a line near the top of the palm like this and u should be good. nice art

[desert sand]

now that u mention it, don’t fingies have very thin lines too?

[gentle coral]

yea the fingers themselves have lines where they bend at palm side up

its less important rlly than the palm lines tho. you can include it or not depending on how detailed/stylized u want ur drawing to be

[warped pewter]

Oh yeahh I briefly sketched the hand but I forgot to go back to it😭thank youu

[warped pewter]

Kinda done with the rendering (I’m still gonna fix the lighting)
But what background should I do???
(Still open to critique)

[warped pewter]

So far for backgrounds I’m thinking of:
On top of a skyscraper at night?
In a live house like we see in the trailer (but idk if she’s just be in the crowd randomly or on stage or something)
In some kind of machine workshop, so it’s more in-action :3

[warped pewter]

Okay I’m just gonna be done with this lol

[gentle coral]

Final product turned out well. Good job

[warped pewter]

Thank you!!🫶🫶

[ripe prairie]

It's that's your style then it's great

But dam those lats

[warped pewter]

I’m still developing my style lol I suck at this but 🙏🙏