what about the mix is bad and what about it is maybe a little bit nice? thank you for tuning in.
#chloromembrane wyrm lullaby
young oracle
spare sandal
The first "zaps" in the intro could hit harder if they had more low-end energy.
On the bits that sound kinda like synthetic toms, try to pan them a bit, like low toms a bit left and high toms a bit right.
The mid-bass panning is honestly really good! This is something few people pull off well, so good job there.
The highs seem overemphasized versus the mids and lows. Adjust that in the mix.
Whatever sidechain compression you're using sounds very professional, so keep on doing whatever you're doing with that!
The main issue is that this sounds like an intro without a "payoff" where the song kicks into full gear. I'd love to hear this turned into a full song!
The outro is pretty much perfect!
For real, this is an excellent concept. Please ping me if you expand this into a full song, because I think it has a lot of potential.