Music about a hike up a hill

[golden matrix]

For my song, I wanted this to be like a hike up a mountain that ends with reaching the top but I don't know if this sounds like it. My problem now is that i can't make people feel what i want
Any feedback would be appreciated.

[remote beacon]

hehe this topic title made me think of that awesome kate bush song, running up that hill

lets see how this sounds

oo nice and intimate

steady and paced

ok, for sound design criticism,

the strings are strangely distant to me versus the piano bc of how the reverb on the patch is

later in the song, that pluck synth arp is a good way to tie em together,

but that middle section where it's just strings is so sparse!

this would work well with detailed, interesting filmed video

nice work 🙂